2nd edited part of practice film

Main weaknesses:

• lack of footage so there are a few jumps
• The actor is laughing/giggling in about half of the shots
• The lift scene is the same shot and jumps.
• The automatic door (3 shots) break the 180 degree rule as the camera is in the wrong place
• Lack of close-ups so we feel distant from the on-screen character and her story
• The shots are longer because there are a lack of variety of shots